Andy - the electric man!

We have been learning to draw and write brainstorms then use our brainstorms to write recounts. We wrote about Andy the electric man using what happened first, then, next and finally. Here are some examples of our writing.

The Music Show by C.J 

First we went to the hall. Then we waited for Andy to change his voice. Next Andy played music. Finally we got to dance.

The Music Magician by Alex

First we walked quietly to the hall. Then we listened to Andy changing his voice. Next he played his happy guitar. Finally we went back to class

First Andy played his happy guitar. Then he changed his voice. Next Andy put on a song. Finally we danced. By Lachlan

The Music Show by Gala

First we walked into the hall. Then we sat down and listened to Andy change his amazing voice. Next we listened to him play on his happy guitar. Finally we went to class.

The Music Show by Emmylou

First we went into the hall. Then we sat down and he sung a song. Next he played music and invited Poppy on stage. Finally we went back to the classroom.